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One Year Ago
Contributed by
forgottenone_iam
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:09:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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One year ago, i met you there was something
about you i told myself i couldnt live without,
you were something special, something i know
every gurl in her life time would want and you
were standing right in front of me.
Your crystal blue eyes that big smile that would
bring out the cutiest dimples is what i remember
of that night, the knowing i needed to talk to you
and if i didnt i know the next day i would be kicking
myself in the ass.
Finally the time had come, it was now or never i
walked over towards you nervous as no one knows
and said a quiet shy hello, i was afraid of regection
from you, scared you wouldnt like me, i took my
chances and went for it.
You were nothing i had ever expected, you were
something different, i have never felt this way
about another guy, all my dreams right then have
come true that night was so special to me i wish
you new how it felt to be me.
It was not me to find a guy and talk to him for
only three or four hours and already be in love,
that says there is something about you that drew
me in.
That night i didnt want to leave i wanted to stay
and never let go, never let go of that night cuz i
didnt know the next time i would see you.
Then again i didnt know it was gonna be this long
until i didnt see you, i havent seen you in a Year,
that hurts me so badly i miss everything about
what you look like and how you smell.
When will my happyness be back in my arms,
when will i hold you and never let go, i wanna
feel whole again, i dont wanna be empty anymore.
Everything we have been threw the past year has
broken my heart but then again it is so good, it
has helped me grow as a person, all though i was
hurt i still love, still love you so much, i just wish
you new.
You were everything i wanted and everything i
needed, it was special and made me a happy
person, i just didnt want to leave or say
good-bye.
The year has gone by fast i miss you so much
but then again we are better as friends, its
a perfect life as long as you are my friend.
I miss you greatly and i hope you are happy
cuz i know i am.
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Re: One Year Ago
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by xtremcalibur on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 03:31:52 AM AEST
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| Going through the words, at times a little confused, but there was something about this write that was special. I believe that everything needs to be given a chance. You could try and send it, but don't expect much. That way you wouldn't be disappointed. Personally, and please don't take this wrong, I would rewrite it with a bit more thought. I think when you rewrite it, you will see what needs to be worked on. The end result will be extremely pretty and sincere. I liked it or I wouldn't have posted. Thank you for sharing your words. |
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