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untitled
Contributed by
Jake
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Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I sit here thinking of lifes regrets.
Picturing how things could be.
I wonder if there was a way to write the wrongs.
Would I still be me?
I have done many stupid things
Some huge and some small.
But all important parts of life/
It can all come to a wrong turn, or a short fall.
But all the choices had a purpose
I dont know it all, but I know part.
It is enough to prove I have no regret.
Even if I havent always been smart.
My mistakes have made me what I am
I have always known this is true.
And I know deep down I have done right.
My choices brought me close to you.
You have made my life a happy place,
Always there when I need you.
Memories locked inside my head.
For this I will always love and care for you.
Copyright ©
Jake
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2002-12-17 13:00:00]
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Re: untitled
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by TheSpiritx on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 01:08:06 PM AEST
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Nice job, Jake.
Keep writing and developing poems. Also, consider deviating from a four bar stanza... maybe in the future you could try a 3 or 5. Anyway, good poem and I will be looking for some others. |
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Re: untitled
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:20:07 PM AEST
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I hope the person that you love is going to read this because it's beautiful... welcome to YPDC Jake i look forward to reading more of your poetry...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: untitled
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by Cutey on
Monday, 26th May 2003 @ 02:06:54 PM AEST
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Wow that was so very beautiful keep up the great work that was so very wonderful i loved it i can see you have a lot of love for the person you did this about i'm ready to read more from you.
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Re: untitled
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 30th March 2004 @ 09:10:11 PM AEST
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| thats also really good jake. keep sharing |
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