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Black
Contributed by
suicidebringshappiness
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Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:24:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There came a time,
Where everything started to fade,
Like a blanket over your head,
Solemly sleeping,
Comfort reigns down,
And your put to an eternal rest,
You shut your eyes,
The black creeps in,
Like the morning fog,
And may you rest in peace,
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2005-03-15 12:24:25]
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Re: Black
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by b_rand on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:18:35 PM AEST
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| I would have to say I get this feeling everytime I lay down in my bed after not sleeping for a few days (im a college kid). Great job describing it. |
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Re: Black
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by helianthus on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 05:17:07 PM AEST
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| A fellow poet online once wrote to me, "Come into the light?!" But I figured, what for, I'm so damned good at being BLACK. I liked this one a lot. Thank you. Lisa |
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Re: Black
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:02:59 PM AEST
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| whoa......that reminds me of my brother. that was a good write |
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