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My Tears
Contributed by
bibi
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Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 05:29:22 PM in AEST
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The tears I cry, I cry for you
My heart does ache so sad and blue
They took you from my loving arms
They thought that I would do you harm
Not knowing of the love we shared
Nor all the the trails that we beared
The void they left so deep inside
I will not try to even hide
Each and every night I pray
Don't let them take your love away
I hear your voices, more your laughter
I miss those times forever after
This emptiness I cannot ease
My sadness never seems to cease
I miss you oh so very much
No words could ever say enough
Forget me not my dearest hearts
From your lives I shall not part
Although I cry It's not in vain
For I know we will be again
and all the time that passes by
Will show us all the reason why
As absence makes our hearts grow fonder
The love we share will never wander
and God will guide you back to me
and all the world will finally see
I love you A.J and Zavy too
With all my heart I say to you
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Re: My Tears
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:32:48 PM AEST
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This is beautiful! It brings a tear omy eye... I can feel ur pain in this write. Great job!
~Donna~ |
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Re: My Tears
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:38:08 PM AEST
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| awwwww wonderful write...your loss is both felt and so well expressed in this piece! |
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Re: My Tears
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by Raevan on
Saturday, 2nd July 2005 @ 11:24:57 AM AEST
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| Wow... First of all I'm so sorry for the pain and emptiness you are being forced to go through. I felt your pain as if it were mine. You did an excellent job in writing this poem, every word perfectly placed. It seems to me that the harm to them came when they were taken from someone who loves them as much as you do. I will keep you in my prayers. |
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Re: My Tears
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 19th January 2016 @ 01:49:13 PM AEST
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| sad write raeven ... made me cry. |
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