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Just.One.Look
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:31:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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a little cut
a little snip
a little slip in the conformity that just doesn't mix
a wish
a plea
a forgiven detention and a whirlwind of beliefs...
a trying might
a strong head
and a weak mind
a beating heart
and a sweet lullaby.
sing yourself to sleep
with your own breath
in and out you see the dreams,
they slip and fall
the day catches,
and your out of death.
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Sirena_Degana
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2005-03-15 19:31:01]
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Re: Just.One.Look
(User Rating: 1 )
by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:37:37 PM AEST
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I like how this could of been...I mean its good and everything,
but it could of been better, atleast i think so.
My opinion *shrugs*
3 and a half but ill give ya 4 stars |
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Re: Just.One.Look
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:57:26 PM AEST
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| wow, thats deep. that made me stop and think... |
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