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My Mummy & Daddy
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:21:55 PM in AEST
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I am the goody and you both the baddy,
I was never loved by my mummy and daddy,
You both had your selfish reasons,
Your poor baby suddenly went out of season.
Just one night you spent out of passion,
Such a shame that a baby had to happen,
Hey here I was but you didnt care,
When I needed love you wasnt there.
Mum I am glad you died,
When I found out I never even cried,
Dad you were a waste of space.
Something that was so easy to erase.
You both deserve each other,
Underneath deaths cover,
You brought me into this cruel world,
A helpless & scared baby girl.
But you both decided to turn your back,
It seems in loving & consideration you lacked,
I write this to let you both know,
That until I die I will hate you both so.
Thanks Mum and thanks Dad,
I just hope that you are now glad,
One of you is dead the other god knows where,
All my love from the daughter that no longer cares.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-03-15 21:21:55]
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:28:33 PM AEST
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| This is so well written and so intense. It's their loss, because your so sweet and talented. Amazing work, as always. |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:21:55 PM AEST
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| I don't know what to think of this poem. One is that I am glad you got your feelings out. two I don't know about what has happened in your life to say a thing. three. I think that you need to forgive them in order to move on in your life and have happiness. four. No one can help you but GOD take his hand and look forward to having a wonderful life with him. five. here is a hug. |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by Angelic_Demon on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:47:34 PM AEST
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Wow... this is such an intense poem. I don't really know what else to say, hon... It's really good though.
Love ya,
Mara |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 11:06:31 PM AEST
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wow friend,
this is so sad. I can't comprehend any parent not wanting a daughter like u. My children have been my life and still are along with my grand children.
Girl jus hang in there as we luv u here.
U r a great writer so keep it up.
I f ya ever need to talk p.m. me I don't do i.m any more.
luv, huggs, strength,
emy
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:43:41 AM AEST
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A sad, emotional & heart breaking write, Pixie.
I'm so sorry for all the pain u have endured in ur life. Ur a strong girl hon. A talented poetess
with an amazing uniqueness in your poetry.
Hold ur head high girl we love ya here and we're all proud of ya. Take care |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:00:57 AM AEST
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a great release of your emotions Pixie Im glad you let it all out but Im so sorry that you had all this pain in your life. I agree with above comments your strong and made of grit a sweetheart through and through and you will do well in life this I know. Im here whenever you need me you know that!
Hugs and more hugs
Michelle |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:24:38 AM AEST
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God that was depressing..non the less it was really writen well. Amazing write as always sweetie.
Jane |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:34:19 PM AEST
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A powerful and courageous write. Very emotional and wonderfully written. You certainly deserved better. Perhaps if you can someday forgive them for your sake, not theirs, you can lessen the emotional impact they have on you.
Peace be with you,
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 04:39:58 PM AEST
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| This was such a sad write. Can't imagine having parents like that. I do agree with Willofree about forgiving them, going on, love yourself. I read your work alot Pixie, I hear so much pain and I hate to hear that you have so much trouble loving yourself. I used to not love myself, I have been learning. I still have a ways to go, but I have come so far. I don't know Pix what help if any you have seeked for your problems, but counseling did help me alot. The real key to happiness is being happy with yourself and loving yourself. Best of luck to you and as always I wish you much peace my sister. |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by venkat on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:34:49 AM AEST
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| Sad and emotional..well written..I understand how you passed through childhood..I am very sorry dear. :-) venkat |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by MMISS on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 06:17:03 AM AEST
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| PIXIE,LOVE HEALS ALL WOUNDS. I CAN ATTEST TO THAT! |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:43:48 AM AEST
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| this broke my heart... |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:30:07 AM AEST
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Wow Pixie what a write!
Releasing this poem would have stirred you within...as it shakes any reader!~
Take care and remember we on YPDC think you are so talented and special..!
cheers!~ |
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Re: My Mummy & Daddy
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 08:57:20 PM AEST
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Harsh, but it seems to be well-placed hatred to me.
I found out a while back that my bio-dad was in a drug-induced diabetic comma... I didn't have any emotion and it was just due to our relationship (actually, strictly the lack thereof) and it was really hard to me to understand that not feeling anything was okay this time.
This poem reminded me of that.
You make a good connection with your audience.
Lots of love and peace,
Chelsea |
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