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Tomorrow
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:25:16 PM in AEST
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I often go through these droughts
Where pain slowly welcomes me back
And in these gaps, lost of space and time
Sensibility escapes my competitive mind
The truce, you may call sleep
Where dreams run rampant
A vision beyond the uncommon
Captivates my every being, in single instant
Tonight again, I have lost my faith
Tomorrow is such a precious time to waste
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2005-03-15 21:25:16]
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Re: Tomorrow
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by Mystic_Beauty_nz on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:44:01 PM AEST
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| such a familiar feeling.. loss of faith... yet somehow it keeps coming back. Very well written. A poem that many will connect with for everyone gets a turn... and everyone too gets a turn at finding faith again.... keep the belief and faith will follow |
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