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I SAID try.
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:37:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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How can i express my love for you?
by obeying your rules and law ,so true.
How can i say am please with you?
by blessing me everyday brandnew.
How can i show u ,when am mad with u?
by never showing my true worth.
so true,so true.
being lock in a box ,is no fun.
Copyright ©
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2005-03-16 01:37:38]
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Re: I SAID try.
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:41:01 AM AEST
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your right being locked in a box is no fun this is a unique write
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Re: I SAID try.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:42:18 AM AEST
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Very sad. Break away from the box.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I SAID try.
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by PeaceLovHppnes on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:58:32 AM AEST
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Make up your own rules..a box is no place to be
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Re: I SAID try.
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by inoc on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:03:58 PM AEST
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I like the way this poem reads...
I liked the second paragraph...
How can I say I am please with you?
By blessing me everyday brandnew.
cheers!~
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