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Whim of fears
Contributed by
naveen
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 05:03:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Been lonely for a year
Am lonely, relenquished no one near
Running after false dreams
Am wasted, looking those elusive future's reflections
In life's perpetual streams
My life totally bizzare
Its me and my false apprehensions
Those gloomy imaginations and dreams to stare
Don't know I be at top
But my life now is a boring squib, a big flop
With no cheers
Juss fears
Fears of loosing it out
Loosing it out in
Blind Mad ratrace to know where
I am totally consumed
My mind, my soul tottally fumed
Fumed by thoughts of doing somethin
But my presents in rocks, its only a dark sere nothin
Sometimes when looking my shadow
I always laughs at
Laughs At the way
it Still moving a vivid hay
After vanquished by life's cruel strays
Wanna know my schedules,
Its follows no biological rules
Its tottaly churned in daily moil
am in groans off that burning turmoil
A stroll to earn a name,
Running to pull my life a fame
Once you trounced my life
With your sharp edgy knives
Trying forget
But How can I
Those wounds are still raw
With my heart ebued in agony's and wrath
These wounds now in my essence
My heart dead, no feelings.
No thoughts off life's presence
But someday, strikes a silver lining
My life's be renewed with precating rhymes
I will give my life away
To form a new way
Way to my life's pinaacle
Way to my ascent
Please send your comments::
Copyright ©
naveen
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2005-03-16 05:03:26]
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Re: Whim of fears
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by Wesley_Dale_Willis on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:16:33 AM AEST
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| Life is rough but we all have to make the best of it. As far as fame usually a poet isn't famous until after they are dead. Unless of course you are as good as Robert Frost. You need to look at some of your grammer, I know mine is off from time to time. But it seems yours was way off. Smooth all of those smoothies out, and your on your way. Keep writing though I will read from time to time. Regards Wesley Willis... |
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Re: Whim of fears
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by unrestrained19 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:42:02 AM AEST
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| i really liked this poem, it may sound weird but i can totally relate even though i don't know you, they language was great, there were so many lines that jumped out at me!!! |
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Re: Whim of fears
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by inoc on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 06:38:53 AM AEST
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A clever write....a good pace...
hope you find that you arn't so lonely ...
Hope you find life your new life just around the corner!~
cheers!~ |
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