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The Rose
Contributed by
gothicangel
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:10:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Like a rose has its thorns
I also have mine
Like thorns have a rose
I do not feel fine
People tell me
I dont need to be alone
I say I love it
Because my heart is made of stone
The person I am
I do not want to be
I hurt the ones that I love
If they only could see
That I am not an angel
That I can not fly
I am that thorn
I make people cry
I hurt the ones that I love
I do not really know
Why I hurt them all
I wish I knew how
I do hurt them
what I really do wrong
I wish that they see
I am only trying to be strong
I am strongest on my own
I hate that thorn
I wish I hadn't one
I am sorry I was born
Searching for a meaning
To continue with life
I don't want to be
here alone with my knife
I am struggling
with all of the pain
If someone can't help me
I will go insane
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2005-03-16 09:10:56]
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Re: The Rose
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by Rhymingron on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:39:31 AM AEST
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| Looks pretty good to me. |
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Re: The Rose
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by morgana on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 12:05:25 PM AEST
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| awsome...ya don't need to add ne mor to it..it might ovr do it!...i love it! keep it up! |
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Re: The Rose
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by Dying_Angel on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 03:21:04 PM AEST
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| i liked this a lot...because i know the feeling. Jenx |
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Re: The Rose
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by Stonedraider23 on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:49:01 PM AEST
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| god write leave it u ended it well |
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