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every day
Contributed by
edward_jarvis2000
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:19:01 AM in AEST
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Everyday i wake up,
same old thing,
It feals like u dont care anymore,
i try not to think about it,
its so hard not to think about you,
you are my friend and all,
At least i thought,
friends are there fo each other,
but you were ot,
i was there for,
where were you when i needed you,
give it a rest,
stop trying to pretend that your my friend,
just because you dont like me doesent mean i dont like me,
doesent me i dont like you,
wait a minuate,
what do you care,
you said you would be there but you wernt.
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Re: every day
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:42:02 PM AEST
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Good poem.
I guess you feel alone right now. I hope that will change in the future.
Who ever you were talking to, maybe they will be there next time.
I think you did a good job getting your feelings out in the poems you have written.
I hope you will read the poems of others so that you know you are not alone. I hope you know there are people you can talk to.
The next step in writing is learning how to move on. It's okay to write the bad things down as long as it is helping so that you can write some good things too. |
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