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Solitude With You
Contributed by
BabyLuby
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As black ravens fly, snow outside
Silently falls
Innocence and purity is all I desire
As i fall,
Yet again,
Into my pit of depression
You peacefully pass me by.
The virgin snow slowly turns black
As my footprints are left behind
The weak die young;
Young and weak like me,
You are strong and you leave me last
Alone again and wishing for peace
My life ends
The knife in my hands finally grants me the relief that I have so long needed
You are again by my side
Happiness and hope is within us
The future becomes my guiding light
And all I feel is love
As bluebirds soar in the saphire sky
My wounds heal and my mind is clear
Tranquil,
Painless,
My life is complete
Complete and you are by my side.
Copyright ©
BabyLuby
... [
2002-12-17 19:40:00]
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Re: Solitude With You
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by juliette on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 08:01:09 PM AEST
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| Very good poem! |
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Re: Solitude With You
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:02:07 PM AEST
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| yes, this is a very good poem. i'll be reading more of yours. |
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Re: Solitude With You
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:02:07 PM AEST
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| yes, this is a very good poem. i'll be reading more of yours. |
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Re: Solitude With You
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 02:54:15 PM AEST
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Ah Romeo and Juliette in another time....this is beautiful the way you wrote this all out...and the last line of the poem is so fitting....Complete and you are by my side...i enjoyed reading this one thanks for sharing it...Keep em' coming...
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Re: Solitude With You
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 03:00:26 PM AEST
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| beautifully written and a wonderful exploration |
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