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Drifting Away
Contributed by
xxSuicidalChickxx
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:50:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You hear my voice But you dont see me You feel the presence Of the past But my time has run out My spirits drifting away fast
Each second of each day You are getting more and more Closer to me Soon your time will be over And together we will be
Ill meet you on the other side Those words that I once said Wont be erased from your thoughts That are inside of your head
Now your time is now And you can remain with me In the one place we will be in Together forever we will be
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2005-03-16 20:50:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Drifting Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by write_whenit_hurts on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:57:20 PM AEST (User
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wow, that's really good! i can relate to that very well! i love how u constructed this! mi applause. |
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Re: Drifting Away
(User Rating: 1 ) by brains_of_the_insane on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:54:36 PM AEST (User
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Exellent write! I really like how you put your poem together. |
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