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Ghosts
Contributed by
highly_flammable
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Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 08:58:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I feel like Im not really living
Theres countless ghosts inside my head
Emotions cut down so theyre never felt
Echoing forever, almost dead
I know theyre there but I cant feel them
Inside a while other world I cant touch
Existing but simply just not wholly there
And living on sight just isnt enough
And Im tired of being alone in the darkness
With no friends or feelings to fill up the void
Even pain I wish I could experience finally
But most of all love, excitement, and joy
The world spins around me, blurs, always moving
Everything else progresses but me
And I look at the glass globe that contains all my feelings
Wishing I could break it, set its prisoners free
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Re: Ghosts
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by AfterLivingDeath on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:51:37 PM AEST
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i really liked this. i can relate to it a lot. i'm always getting thoughts to go around in my head over and over again.
ALD |
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Re: Ghosts
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by echo03 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:06:24 PM AEST
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| wow i loved that!!!!! i feel like that so many times......rhianna i will be there......i love you, even if you think i am deserting you cause of ian i want you to know you are still number one on my list * not in a lesbian way of course* lylas mysm............koren |
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Re: Ghosts
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by PuppyChow on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:30:53 PM AEST
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Thanks Rhi for posting my poem w/ out!!!!!GIVING ME CREDIT!!!!
**yes this is Hannah, whom she has posted poems for in the past but NO LONGER!!!**
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Re: Ghosts
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by PuppyChow on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:41:03 PM AEST
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| To all who read this poem:Rhi accidentally forgot to put my name on it, as she has posted others of mine in the past. she accidentally forgot to give me credit. if you dont believe me, ask her- im being honest here. **sorrt rhi my last comment was very indignant but im not mad anymore**-hannah |
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Re: Ghosts
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by Stonedraider23 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:16:22 PM AEST
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| well its good but i neva feel this way and doubt others do we all feel it n a diff way but hell what do i know |
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Re: Ghosts
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by highly_flammable on
Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:35:30 PM AEST
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| yes. i apologize to everyone who read this poem under false pretence. it is hannah's. i was in a rush when i did this, simply copying and pasting, as she sent it to me. when i pasted this, she didnt have an account and asked me to do it for her. once again, im sorry, especially to hannah. |
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