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Sidewalk cracks at dawn
Contributed by
jyssvw
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Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:07:02 PM in AEST
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Tripping on New York City sidewalk cracks at dawn
Completely lost, I struggle to find my way home
I regain my balance, and begin to understand
Why chaos is preferred in no-mans land
Ordinary men, desperate for a little room
Pardon their souls, they know only how to consume
Witnesses to the eagle which once flew
Now their wicked sky burns bright blue
Ordinary as i am, I seek only the truth
Gazing upon tonights star, from atop this roof
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2005-03-16 22:07:02]
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Re: Sidewalk cracks at dawn
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:16:03 PM AEST
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It's a shame how people take advantage...=
I liked these lines the most:
"I regain my balance, and begin to understand
Why chaos is preferred in no-mans land"
Nice write. |
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Re: Sidewalk cracks at dawn
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 01:51:01 AM AEST
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Very vividly done- and quite profound too.
The last two lines are great.
Excellent work. |
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