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beating heart
Contributed by
afterlivingdeath
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:21:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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as my heart beats
time just go's by
never stopping to take a breathe
and really never letting you say good-bye
but as long as it beats
nothing can truely go wrong
every minute is somethig special
and somehow life feels so long
then as it beats
you learn something new
you learn the pleasures of love
and if love is something true.
and as my heart beats
everything eventually comes together
but as soon as it does
you may and will be happy forever.
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2005-03-16 22:21:08]
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Re: beating heart
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by brains_of_the_insane on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 10:50:17 PM AEST
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| I really like your style of writing, I can really relate to what you have to say. I think that it was a very good write! |
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Re: beating heart
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:18:17 AM AEST
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| I've read your other works, and I really like your style of writing. It's so sincere...You have a lot of talent. Keep writing, I'll keep reading. :-) |
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