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Satanic's Hell
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:02:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cloded blood
In bloodless veins
Your story pains
As your dream turns to dust
Your blackened heart
Was not enough
Just the beginning
Of being pulled apart
You worshipped his evil
You trusted his smile
Greatfully in denial
He turned his back on you
You where used
He was your Idol
You waited for Hell
But Satan refused
You went to Heaven
Life ending in a fallen cry
Your a future angel as you die
And you know how the story goes
...
Hear a bell ring
And
Another angel gets their wings
...
And your time will come
And eternity, is ever lasting
Ungreatful in his compassion
Your time
...
Has come
...
As the bell rings
Your worst nightmare,
Never you would dream
...
As you recieve
...
Your wings
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-03-16 23:02:42]
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Re: Satanic's Hell
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:18:38 PM AEST
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| lmao. clark, you amaze me sometimes. actually often. but im getting used to it. =] this was outstanding. a masterpiece. a work of art. brilliant. original. and you took my line! "bloodless veins" ::rambles on:: |
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Re: Satanic's Hell
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by Drake666 on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:23:06 PM AEST
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Hi Amber I relly like this POME
LOVE The *****,
Billy |
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Re: Satanic's Hell
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 12:50:53 PM AEST
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wow i love this.
lol amazingly dark just the way i like it.
great job. |
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