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Rain
Contributed by
monkey
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Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:06:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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Drizzling down
like strings of glass
falling from the perfect sky
never quite understood
why you thought rain
was such a bad
dreary thing
i rejoice at the sight
i cannot wait to
get out of the house
and feel the rain
between my bare toes
to soak up the moisture
in my thick brown hair
and laugh and dance
in the streets
rain
is beautiful
Copyright ©
monkey
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2005-03-16 23:06:57]
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Re: Rain
(User Rating: 1 )
by tin on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:30:05 PM AEST
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| Fantastic poem, i absolutly love the rain. i love to just stand outside and feel it beating down on my skin.it's so great, one of my greatest pleasures in life and it doesn't cost a cent. all you gotta do is open a door and walk outside. and again, great write! |
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Re: Rain
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:52:16 AM AEST
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Wonderful!
I can hear the rumble of dark clouds and smell the fragrance of wet earth just now. I agree- rain is beautiful...
And you've expressed it here so well- I think this is an excellent piece.
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