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Numb
Contributed by
TheGrim
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:37:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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She stares blankly at the screen,
Though her tears are not unseen.
He can see them,
And he worries
Shes trying to hide,
Because how she feels she cant decide.
How could this happen?
What will she do?
He doesnt know,
And her spirit is low.
What does she feel?
And how will she tell him
Shes hurting deep down,
And he can tell by her frown.
Should they stop talking?
So that she doesnt feel more?
Hell just hurt her,
Which just makes it tougher
Her emotions are gone,
Shes too spaced out.
The tears will flow,
Yet only those three will know
Copyright ©
TheGrim
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2005-03-16 23:37:11]
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Re: Numb
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:42:20 PM AEST
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yeah kinda lost the ryhme but did a great job on expressing the story....Good job
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Re: Numb
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:43:42 PM AEST
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U really should talk about what's buried inside as it will only hurt more if u keep it bottled up.
writing is a great healing tool and u r a great writer.
huggs,
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