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Green-Light Red-Light
Contributed by
xrockstheheart
on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 11:57:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Green-light red-light
How we use to play
And I still remember
Just like yesterday
Green-light I would hold you tight
Red-light you'd pretend to fight
Even then I knew
I'd miss you that night
Green-light then we moved away
Red-light I would often say
Green-light it's for you I pray
Red-light are you here to stay
Green-light I will hold you tight
Red-light hold me through the night
Green-light red-light
How we use to play
Green-light time for celebration
Red-light, red-lights, red-lights!
And I still remember
Just like yesterday
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xrockstheheart
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2005-03-16 23:57:54]
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Re: Green-Light Red-Light
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:02:49 AM AEST
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hmmm...Okay...Well i can't say its bad, its original though and it is pretty good...::Shrugs::
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Re: Green-Light Red-Light
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:45:43 AM AEST
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I liked this for it's orginality and the metaphors used.
Quite simple, but nicely composed.
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