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My Love
Contributed by
sick_n_twisted
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:01:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Im in love
At first I thought it was odious
But I discovered love
Inside of me
And I wouldnt have
If it wasnt for you
You helped me love
Took away the hate
With you I see my destiney,my fate
Maybe im oblivious
Maybe Im blind
but love you helped me find
For I discovered love all around me
And inside of me
You took away the nagative things
And put love into my life
I used to be forlorn
Hiding my feelings inside
But you found my true feelings
You found me
For I am in love with the most beautiful soul
That I will never take for granted
Because hes made my life so enchanted
For hes my life to live
Hes my love,
Copyright ©
sick_n_twisted
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2005-03-17 00:01:57]
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Re: My Love
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by ForeverAlone on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:05:38 AM AEST
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HEY you stole MY TITLE to the poem I posted today!...lol...=]..Good job on the poem and I hope the best for you..
Clark =] |
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Re: My Love
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 03:36:32 AM AEST
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Nice poem!
So much love in so simple words.
You're lucky to have him.
Keep writing!
-Butch |
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Re: My Love
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 03:38:12 AM AEST
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| By the way, I'm sorry for forgetting to mention this, but, he's luckier to have you! |
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Re: My Love
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:43:49 AM AEST
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Aww this is such a cute poem showing your love and affection to this guy, keep writing sweetie.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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Re: My Love
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by xrockstheheart on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 03:02:40 PM AEST
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| Hola you are the next poem. I have posted on the forum my thought on the next and previous poem, join the discussion. Love is always a universal theme, but because it is so pervasive a topic, one has to thread lightly so to speak. it is a good theme, but i find the poetics weak. later |
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