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The ME I never knew
Contributed by
Nardo
on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:17:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I feel like bursting!
the Light inside
I never want it to go out
no cold winds to blow out this candle
bright and hot.
Too much to say
and
too much to feel
knowing now
what it means to be ALIVE.
Say good bye to those evil deeds
done in the dark
no more smoke filled dreams
with chemical eyes.
Just Me,
standing Tall and Strong.
Copyright ©
Nardo
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2005-03-17 00:17:50]
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Re: The ME I never knew
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:23:06 AM AEST
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Very good write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The ME I never knew
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:25:15 AM AEST
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Sorry, I meant to hit the five stars.
huggs,
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Re: The ME I never knew
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by Tanmaya on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 12:40:27 AM AEST
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Short write but powerfully spoken.
I liked the sincerity in it...
Well done- keep standing strong. |
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Re: The ME I never knew
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 09:43:09 AM AEST
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Powerfull and simple, i like that you got your message across without over doing yourself.
Jane |
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