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Nights in Rome
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 01:39:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Infinite darkness painted across the skies,
Tears from la Bella Luna,
Diamonds descending earthbound...
Ancient ruins whispering of timeless history,
Historia de Amore...
I lay beneath Obscurity's masterpiece, Night,
Warm and safe within my lovers arms
With his guitar of fire,
He plays our bittersweet song
Delicious seduction
Scrumptious adoration
My Italian angel of music,
Ruler of my heart and mind,
I give myself to you willingly
Hold me close,
Whisper the tale of our love sweetly in my ear,
Satin caresses all over my skin,
Blissful kisses for every tear
I cant help but fall in love,
Every time you look at me,
Such true love in your eyes I see
La Mona Lisa smiles her enigmatic grin,
She knows something the world doesnt...
But we know she smiles because of the eternal love we share,
A bond no one could ever break,
A depth no ocean could ever surpass,
A beauty that not even la Luna could compare...
And we drown in each others sea,
Relishing this new freedom we've given each other...
Take me away, gorgeous seraph,
High into the midnight sky,
Upon your fiery silk wings,
Show me the world through your precious eyes
Make me melt with your candy-sweet kisses,
And I die a blissful death... as you softly whisper, "Baby, Ill love you forever..."
Nights in Rome,
Endless hours with you,
Doing what lovers do...
Long talks of everything and nothing,
Dancing to that song we know so well
In silence our bond grows ever stronger,
For we feel the gentle touch of love,
And our hearts can't help but welcome it with open arms...
Dreams of you bring me closer,
To where you are
We'll meet at the shores of illusion,
Share a kiss under the moonlight,
Live like Romans do,
And Ill never stop loving you...
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-03-17 13:39:11]
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Re: Nights in Rome
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 02:23:34 PM AEST
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Rich and textured, with a continental flavour.
I admire its consistency, although in some places I think certain quotes are unnecessary in the context of such emotion;
"Baby, I’ll love you forever..."
Perhaps you could have left what he says to our imaginations . . ?
Anyways - nice stuff, again. |
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Re: Nights in Rome
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 04:35:38 PM AEST
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A Masterpeice of writting, . . .
et con sona de angelela . . . Bravo . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Nights in Rome
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 01:24:51 PM AEST
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Thank you for taking me to Rome. Some where I would love to visit. You made it happen in the way I always dreamed it would.
One day soon we will fly there on the wings of a dove.
Magnificent and pure romantic images
Love Angelxxxxxx |
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Re: Nights in Rome
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 04:02:30 PM AEST
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Yes, yes, and YES !!! When in Rome ...
Find Amour ... hold it tight ... draw it in and let it consume you completely
What more could be said of another flawless addition to an already long list of favorite poems. Marvelous Stephy ~
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: Nights in Rome
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 11:18:42 PM AEST
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| Ahhh I remember Rome.. and Salerno... sweet Salerno. brava... |
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Re: Nights in Rome
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by vibes2go on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 11:20:08 PM AEST
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| by the way..their pizza is so much better..lol |
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