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gifted
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
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this soul has turned bitter and black
feeding off the hate of others
past lifetimes- memories that wont come back
left all alone,
in this world of pain
blackened by a frozen moment in time
repeating only in his mind
no one else can see
all the anger and pain he feels
wanting to leave this places he wishes werent real
left all alone
in this moment of pain
hate finds a new way to breed everyday
spawning from every which way
all the demons tear at his mind
soon itll all be left behind
his body losing all vitality
vivid eyes closing to embrace a new reality
embrace me
one final time
erase me
it will still be fine.
Copyright ©
fallensilence
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2002-12-17 23:40:00]
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Re: gifted
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:32:29 PM AEST
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This is so sad....and your friend, if he felt like being erased would be fine then tha's not true....this made me cry....it's a beautiful write but it's so sad....thanks for sharing this one...
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Re: gifted
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 05:11:27 PM AEST
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| wow...that's so beautiful...you haven'r had the credit you deserve for this poem and nothing i will say will give you that...but wow... |
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Re: gifted
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:31:23 PM AEST
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this is a very sad poem... but a great write
Keep them coming
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