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Let me know
Contributed by
candiegurl202005
on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 03:54:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Open up your heart to me
Let me know if it's meant to be
Have you figured out what to say?
Instead of always walking away
You tell me i mean so much
Your feelings are up in a bunch
Am I the only girl for you?
I wanna know if it's true
That you feel blue
When I'm not by your side
In your hot ride
What does your heart have to tell me?
What much you show me?
Tell me baby
Tell me
I'm yours if you say so
So don't let me go
Get on your knees and prove me wrong
And let all your love for me show
Invite me into your life forever more
To open up your heart to me
In addition,let me know it's true
You can't live without my love
Cause it's all in the hands above
We were meant to be
You and me
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2005-03-17 15:54:18]
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Re: Let me know
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 03:31:29 PM AEST
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I liked the poem, you are a good writer..
Just a tip though, don't work so hard to make everything rhyme. Try a different style..your a beautiful writer and I'd hate to see something get lost in translation due to rhyming...
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