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the beauty in her words
Contributed by
fallensilence
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
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i read her words to try and comprehend
try and find what she sees
even though ill never understand
her words are beautiful to me
i hope one day shell see through him
and all he pretends to be
see right through and see me
im screaming out for her touch
but shes deaf to the sound of my voice
im putting my hand out
giving her another choice
i read her words so i could understand
shes just as hurt as me
too much pain for her to live eternally
i hope one day she'll see through it all
and everything we've pretended to be
see right through and not fall
...i wish i knew just who you are
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Re: the beauty in her words
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by wyrd_faerie on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:40:05 AM AEST
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| this is so good...i love it... |
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Re: the beauty in her words
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 03:36:34 PM AEST
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Oh i hope she see's how your reaching out for her....it sounds like you care for this woman very much.....thanks for sharing this one it's sad...with hopefully a beautiful way to end with full understanding one day...
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Re: the beauty in her words
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by GEQUETSCHT on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:58:51 PM AEST
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aww this is so sad, and sweet. I know how this feels (not with girls, lol) and it hurts.
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Re: the beauty in her words
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by Panther_1978 on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 09:27:35 PM AEST
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I love this poem... its sad but sweet at the same time... keep them coming
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