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Emotional Murder
Contributed by
valek
on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 07:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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my viens run empty
with obsolete emotion
i lost this feeling so simply
with no forewarning or notion
the end began quicker
than the actual beginning
before i knew it i was sicker
than the purpose of my sinning
it all goes back to self destruction
i give myself up to the ones i know will leave
it seems i cant have any devotion
like the kind i make myself believe
will come if i just be patient and wait
then i'll be happy and no longer be hate
the truth is, my emotional murder is innate
for pains the only proof ive been alive, of late
Copyright ©
valek
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2005-03-17 19:11:44]
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Re: Emotional Murder
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by morgana on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 08:44:29 PM AEST
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i like it...i feel the emotion
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Re: Emotional Murder
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:08:18 AM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: Emotional Murder
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by Michaela on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:05:45 AM AEST
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over flowing emotions can really be felt in this wonderful piece! Keep it up!
God bless! |
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Re: Emotional Murder
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by Michaela on
Tuesday, 28th July 2009 @ 06:40:57 AM AEST
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over flowing emotions can really be felt in this wonderful piece! Keep it up!
God bless! |
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