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No One
Contributed by
simmy
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Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 10:45:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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No one awake to hear her cry.
No one there to notice her die.
Everyones there watching as she lies.
Every one there to witness her struggle to fly.
No ones around and I ask why.
Sick of being alone and i try to say good-bye.
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simmy
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2005-03-17 22:45:15]
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Re: No One
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by emystar on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:20:53 PM AEST
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Sad but well said.
It's a masterpeice as there are many that are alone.
I live alone but I have a puppy-n-cats.
Hang in there friend. Jus keep writing as it helps.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: No One
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 11:28:54 PM AEST
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| It's a short piece, but nonetheless very powerful. Excellent work. |
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Re: No One
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 12:37:36 AM AEST
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very powerful and yet so sad.. makes ya think .. great job
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Re: No One
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 01:56:48 PM AEST
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It's sad very sad. A cry for love, I think. A cry to know that someone is there.
I really liked this one.
Take care.
David |
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