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15 Haikus of Nature
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 09:24:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Mountain rises high I have walked through clouds on top Cool mist on my face
Forest thick and green Peaceful, serene, and virgin Keep the saws away
River flows to sea Long confined route it travels Tamed by locks and dams
Horse of my brothers Rode hard into the battle Red man seeks vengeance
Hills are all I see Rolling gently to the sea Beautiful landscape
Eagle flying free Symbol for America On endangered list
Winter left behind Headed down to Southern warmth Sunshine makes me smile
Canyon filled with caves Waterfall flows at one end Long hike to get there
Sunset colorful So many good visuals Psychedelic show
Island of palm trees Barefooted on the warm sand Walking with my love
Ocean so endless Awe inspiring to me Keeper of secrets
Volcano dormant Stands ominous in background You were once awake
Earth, beautiful orb Saddened by your destruction Crying acid rain
Tornado ripped through Left destruction in its path Lives devastated
Sun, hot glowing star Keeps our planet nice and warm Every star's a sun
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Re: 15 Haikus of Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 09:26:57 AM AEST (User
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Oops people. I put my note in the forum under About Anything. Sorry. Peace. Laura |
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Re: 15 Haikus of Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:46:05 PM AEST (User
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you do these well great job!
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Re: 15 Haikus of Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by RavenShadows on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:23:13 AM AEST (User
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Great job |
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Re: 15 Haikus of Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 11:57:26 PM AEST (User
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these are very very beautiful, i love how you laid this out and am happy to have read it:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: 15 Haikus of Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:57:16 PM AEST (User
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Wow very well writin haikus
I read these before but i didnt know what they were. But now I do and I complient you
for your good work here And oh yeah
MUH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Re: 15 Haikus of Nature
(User Rating: 1 ) by colinbaker62 on
Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 04:17:28 AM AEST (User
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Hi Laura, after trying my luck at writing just one haiku, (my first ever) I find a comment has been left by someone who has written many many more. These are truely beautiful pieces indeed. A master class for me that's for sure. I personally feel this style of poetry can literally speak volumes.
Colin |
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