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Peppermint Tea
Contributed by
ToriVeigh
on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:38:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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From time to time
I sit quiet and alone
Sipping a favorite of mine
Letting my mind roam
The taste so strong and sweet
Brings back memories vividly
From my head to my feet
They totally envelop me
The ocean breeze blowing
Making my hair fly
My hearts beat increasing
With you by my side
The adventure of my life
Stumbling our way through the dark
With emotion, the night was rife
Nothing could put out our spark
I see you across the table
A crowd of people around
No need to be social
Your voice, the only sound
Maybe Ill see the first lesson
On water, I learned to stand
Such an exciting session
Filled with water, sun and sand
Whereas the event caused pain
My leg felt anguish
On the quad, I did remain
Even this, I cherish
More clearly than the rest
The intimacy we shared
You and I, breast to breast
To which nothing else compared
Each and every night
We relaxed with the brew
We enjoyed every site
A special trip for me and you
Do you remember that feeling?
The one from so long ago
When our senses were reeling
And joy seemed to endlessly flow
I remember it clearly
Exceedingly I do miss
When you wanted to love me
Unquenchable, the urge to kiss
So many pieces
One common thread
Intensity, each sip increases
Visions of you in my head
Carrying me to my past
A very special flavor
Remembered joy that will last
Peppermint tea, I so favor
Copyright ©
ToriVeigh
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2005-03-18 11:38:33]
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Re: Peppermint Tea
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by Kie on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 05:50:39 PM AEST
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Well I also love peppermint tea but this poem had so much to say beyond that. It was nostalgic, reflective, open and for a moment I saw scenes come alive thru your poetry.
I liked everything about your poem.
Kie |
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Re: Peppermint Tea
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by RavenShadows on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:32:51 AM AEST
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| Great job, loved it :) |
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Re: Peppermint Tea
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by reprobate on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 12:02:53 PM AEST
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you've got me wondering now, what i missed when i had my first shared pot of peppermint tea. where did those rememberances sneak off to? hmmmmm.
beautiful relate of fondness and caring.
thanks for sharing |
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