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APPETITE OF LUST
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:13:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Appetite of lust
The table set romance in the air
Sweet aroma enticing glare
Passion rising feeling the heat
Lust over flowing juices secrete
Arms holding tight sweet embrace
Soft passionate kisses interlace
Hands exploring soft velvet skin
Ripples of ecstasy flowing within
Gentle words whispered in song
Satin dress outlining her thong
Imagine the scene dress cut low
Candle light burning an eerie glow
Delicious vibrations through his veins
Echo's on the window pitter patter of rain
Take me she urged as he began to thrust
Basking in pleasure sweet appetite of lust
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by pixie on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:21:47 PM AEST
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aww that was sweetly written, lovely and tender
pix xx |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by helianthus on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:39:16 PM AEST
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Yeah! I have a poem like this but I thought it was too risque to post. Now, maybe...
Ooh. This was so hot! Thank you. Lisa |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:02:01 PM AEST
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TY UK, THE POEM IS A MASTERPEICE OF
YOUR WOMENLY PROWESS, ENJOY YOUR
EVEVNING . . . DORIAN CAHMBERS |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 04:54:35 PM AEST
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BOILING HOT! INCREDIBLE DESIRE! My goodness, this was steamy and sweet at the same time... My dearest Sweetangel, you have created an ingenius masterpiece, and inspired by the one and only DorianChambers at that!! Beautiful, enchanting, images were superb!! Cheri ange, I am completely blown away by this! Loved it!! A glorious submission! Glad to see you are writing again, my friend! Gorgeous. All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend,
Fleur. *Stephy* |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by mina-1 on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:52:50 PM AEST
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This is an absolutely flawless write, Angel.
Captivating and the image u cast in the readers head is just sensational. A truly excellent piece of poetry. Well done |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by SimplyMe on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:23:35 AM AEST
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Wow!! This was an awsome poem!! I loved it!! I also love the fact you took a risk lol. I'm not bold enough..yet ;-) Soon though lol, real soon!! Much love
~Alucia~ |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 07:12:11 AM AEST
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Ohh now thats what i call sexy and sweet, i liked this a lot.
Thanks for sharing.
Jane |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by bernard on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 01:44:16 PM AEST
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| Another excellent love and desire poem written in a most tender way. You certainly have a way with words SweetAngel. He will be a lucky man that invokes your love. Keep smiling love from bernard. |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by Archie on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 02:44:53 PM AEST
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| Great poem as everyone has said. |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:14:38 AM AEST
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good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 12:57:04 PM AEST
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| wow,i'm speachless,nice work though |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 08:00:02 AM AEST
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Wow hot stuff! i'm still glowin'!!
Johnny. |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:41:19 PM AEST
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| Wow. That is *definitely* what lust is about. Quite well done and extremely descriptive. :-) I enjoyed it! Blessings, J. |
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Re: APPETITE OF LUST
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 01:53:49 PM AEST
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Sounds like a healthy appetite to me ; D
Love it! Sexy, sensual, everything I've come to expect from a sweetangel write. Great visuals too! Hehe.
Scorp ; ) |
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