|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
the strings we shared
Contributed by
sleepwalkingwallflower7
on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 08:51:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
marionettes cant function
on their own
that is something
you should have known
you feel like
theres no strings attached
but they'll pull you down
when reality attacks
i see you as a puppet
and you cant walk on your own
and i can easily say
have fun being alone
what we had
cant be brought back
im sure you know now
in what you lack
so go on your way
life brings what it will
the void you created
will never be filled
Copyright ©
sleepwalkingwallflower7
... [
2005-03-18 20:51:39]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: the strings we shared
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:14:07 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Welcome to YPDC.
This is nice. I like the use of subtle rhymes here, and there's nothing like a good dose of bitterness and jilted independence at 3:11am in the morning.
Keep writing. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
