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The Blankness
Contributed by
KittyGurl
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Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:42:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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One does not realize what they are missing
It's a blankness that might not even exist
To realize this blankness is worse than to not
For one cannot live like that.
The day you realize blankness is the worst day
For once it is realized it must be filled
Or loneliness takes over
Even if one does not realize it.
Blankness is deafening
Blankness is blinding
Blankness is a threat
Blankness exsists.
Copyright ©
KittyGurl
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2005-03-18 22:42:09]
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Re: The Blankness
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by allymp on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 10:35:27 AM AEST
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Blankness is deafening
Blankness is blinding
Blankness is a threat
Blankness exsists.
i loved the last 4 lines of your poem, i'm not sure why but they just grabbed my eye
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