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Master of Lies
Contributed by
ravenshadows
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:06:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Oh father where are you
My voice in the dark night echoes on the stars
Do you hear my sorrow
Do you feel my pain
Why don't you save me
Keep me safe from hurt and harm
What happened to all the promises
Why all the lies
You have betrayed me
I don't understand
You took my hurt and tore down my walls
Crushing my very soul from my body
Now that I am fallen
You no longer want me
I was your cherished angel
Now I am nothing
Nothing but echoes
In a dark cold world
Searching for someone to care
Because you crushed me
Now I am nothing
Living in a world where I am blind
You left me
With not a bit of regret on your mind
Its just you spreading your lies
Its just you full of disguises
I better beware
Next time your warm casual stare
Cause you are a master
A master of lies
Copyright ©
ravenshadows
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Re: Master of Lies
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 03:23:05 AM AEST
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wow very interesting write.
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Re: Master of Lies
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 10:14:26 AM AEST
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very touching poem splendid peice of sad
writting . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Master of Lies
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by inoc on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 06:38:40 AM AEST
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A poweful dark write...
very deep...
can feel the sorrow and pain...
cheers!~ |
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Re: Master of Lies
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by Aphaythea on
Saturday, 18th March 2006 @ 06:08:49 PM AEST
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| This touched me in a way I can't explain. Thank you for writing it. I've put it up on my yahoo360 blog with a link back here to you. I hope that is ok. Please let me know if it is not and I'll remove it. Blessings~* |
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