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Believe
Contributed by
Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 07:56:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Please, not again;
it"s coming back!
It"s moving in
for the attack.
I feel so weak;
I"m not that strong.
I want to quit, but
I"m hanging on.
I"m unsure of
what things are true;
I will always
believe in you.
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Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
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2005-03-19 07:56:05]
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Re: Believe
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by Unbreakable on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 08:10:33 AM AEST
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I like that your poem is short and to the point, you have something to say, but it doesn't take you ten stanzas to say it. I like the content of your poem as well, (if I understand it correctly) that even though you are weak and confused, etc..., you still have that one person to hang onto, that you believe in, I feel like that sometimes
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