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the great painters next masterpiece
Contributed by
romeo
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 01:22:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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circles of white surrounded by blue.
globs of green.
and lines of brown.
the great painter is working on his next masterpiece.
he spreads a little blue paint on the canvas and
makes a pond.
he paints a house.
he paints a golden sun.
and finally a man and woman to enjoy this world.
Copyright ©
romeo
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2005-03-19 13:22:15]
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Re: the great painters next masterpiece
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 02:24:20 PM AEST
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| That was great. Very thought provoking.-betty |
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Re: the great painters next masterpiece
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:00:15 AM AEST
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this is a very neat little poem youve got here, sir...
i like it, and free verse can be quite underrated.. in this case it fits story telling quality of your poem well. also.. i love your choice of words and the imagery youve used. in all, a good write.. also the story itself makes me think of God, creating the world.. very nifty.
peace,
joshua |
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