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fighting with the voice inside
Contributed by
callistonynaeve
on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 04:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Foolish girl of many thoughts
You will be your own tragic end
All your hoping was for not
Your heart may never mend
You thought this was the one
Forever faithful and true
Your own copy of the moon and sun
Well girl looks like the jokes on you
How could you be so stupid?
Letting this one in was dumb
Silly child listening to cupid
Now your whole world is undone
Get over it, move on
But it hurts so bad
It will get better when the time comes
How could I have acted so mad?
Maybe he will take you back
Its not my fault I tired so hard
Obviously it is something you lack
I was perfect to the last shard
I am over him
You love him still
Maybe so, but he will not win
Foolish girl, you will never have your fill
Copyright ©
callistonynaeve
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2005-03-19 16:13:14]
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Re: fighting with the voice inside
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 04:34:49 PM AEST
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A brilliant write here. This is just.... wow. I'm speechless lol. Its written to perfection, flows smoothly and damn but I love it. Deep, powerful and insightful. Exceptional. Thanks for sharing.
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Re: fighting with the voice inside
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by Mystic_Beauty_nz on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 07:32:26 PM AEST
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| it's more than just a voice... it is her inner child.. no one else... fear makes us all go and do mad things on occasion... when the inner child speaks, love it and treat it as the child it is... the love will come... a great write, from the core... well done |
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