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Life of Eternal Sleep
Contributed by
dvsnme816
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 04:24:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I yearn to someday find my peaceful sanctuary,
the day I won't have to mind this useless vocabulary,
and when I find it-there won't be any tears in my eyes,
knowing that when I was alive I was alone-now my best friend is Christ,
the day I look back-I see myself running towards the future,
but what keeps me from moving is these memories deeply rooted,
I begged people to help me but they just turned their back on me,
I listen to them-they ignore me so my pain turns to agony,
put a gun to the back of my head and pull the trigger quietly,
push my mind to my eyes so I can see what they saw in me,
the last couple moments I'll remember waking up to reveille,
but now I will live on wanting a life of eternal sleep...
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2005-03-19 16:24:44]
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Re: Life of Eternal Sleep
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 04:32:45 PM AEST
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This is truly an exceptional write. Its dark, deep and insightful. I think my favourite line
would have to be:
"Push my mind to my eyes so I can see what
they saw in me."
Simply incredible. This has to be one of the best poems I've read in a long time. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: Life of Eternal Sleep
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by mina-1 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 03:50:11 PM AEST
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This is an absolutely superb write.
A true master piece wonderfully written.
Well done and keep up the great work my friend.
Hugs,
Sue |
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