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(fake tears)
Contributed by
blackrose233
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Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 10:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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(fake tears)
There were tears in your eyes as we said our good byes
But were all you tears just lies
Like a big disguise
Like you pretend again and again
I tried to make you proud
Each time I tried youd strike me down
Why did you make me cry
Why oh why am I still with you from all the things you do because I love you
You always said youd stop
You promised I believed you
Now im 6 feet under all your lies all my crys
I always believed you but it never got better you never got better now youre with someone new
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2005-03-19 22:09:09]
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Re: (fake tears)
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by PhantomVampyress on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 10:46:11 PM AEST
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wow this is a powerful write.. I enjoyed this .. was this about a girl who got abused and the guy went on to abuse someone else?? it sounds like it .. I can relate to it though.. very awesome write.
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Re: (fake tears)
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 19th March 2005 @ 11:06:45 PM AEST
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| please do not ask for comments. they are degrading to your talent and your poem. |
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