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Smile
Contributed by
sexypantz
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:02:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Please dont cry
please keep your tears
I want to see you smile
you're so depressed
you look so sad
and you havent laughed in a while
when I look at you
and see your face
you always look away
Is it just me?
or are you trying to hide?
because you do this every day.
I miss the fun
we used to have
when you were still happy
but now you're not
and you always say
how you feel so crappy
I wish that I could
make you better
and tell you how I feel
But then I realize
you aren't a person
and you aren't really real.
cuz when I wipe away my tears
I see the real connection
You're only there
when I look in the mirror
Because you're only my reflection.
Copyright ©
sexypantz
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2005-03-20 00:02:08]
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Re: Smile
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:31:22 AM AEST
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this is a great poem and i loved reading it.
sad but clever write |
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Re: Smile
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 05:14:35 AM AEST
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Yeah ha, This is a winner!
number 1 on top of the charts.
This is the most tender write I have ever read and trust me I've seen some dilly's in my day.
I'm speecheless but u also reflect
2 the reader the vision u see. This is better than what the children do in School, show-n-tell.
A masterpeice.
huggs,
emy |
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