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Losing It All
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:06:26 AM in AEST
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I am losing it all,
No-one hear to answer my call,
Nobody to take the knife from my hand,
Maybe this will be my last stand.
Everything I loved has been stolen,
All in my life is far from golden,
I lost you just like I knew I would,
Now from my heart falls the blood.
You slipped through my fingers,
Now only heart ache can linger,
I looked away as you waved goodbye,
I didnt want you to see my heart cry.
I pretend to be so tough,
But Im weak when love becomes rough,
I just want to cry into your loving arms,
But youre no longer here to shelter me from harm.
Ive got to learn to do this alone,
As heart ache has stripped me right down to the bone,
I have had a taste of my medicine,
Never will I go through this pain again.
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pixie
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Re: Losing It All
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 12:22:47 AM AEST
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i love this and can reeli relate to ur feelings towards love...love hurt me alot too.
well done and hope all is well
peace |
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Re: Losing It All
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:02:58 AM AEST
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this is a masterpiece and so powerful.. it made me cry.. I can so relate pixie.. Awesome job my friend..
JENNI |
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Re: Losing It All
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:06:55 AM AEST
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Excellent....Emotionally charged.....A classic.
The Wind |
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Re: Losing It All
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by loveisendless on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 02:26:12 AM AEST
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TO BAD FOR LOVE,YOU SOUND LIKE A GREAT FRIEND TO LOSE! FOLLOW THAT HEART OF YOURS,BECAUSE IT'LL LEAD YOU TO WHAT IT'S MADE OF...& THAT WOULD BE HEAVEN!
DAN!! |
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Re: Losing It All
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:31:24 AM AEST
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Girl I hear every word u say but someday u will feel different. In 1999 after my last ex -n-and we split. I already was old enuff to realize that I attracted abusive relationship.
I decided it was time to find me. I made some promises after i realized a medical problem along with my genetics I was a walking lonatic.
Well first I promised myself that I wouldn't have another man in my life untill I could take care of myself finaually. My oldest says yeah and once u do that you'll probably feel different and she was right. My point being, I knew i could never luv another untill I could know myself. I vowed to myself the next time I steppted into luv it would be right. Well that's been over six years. The rest will be mystery but when my Prince knocks on my door, I will shower him with luv.
He will come too.
Very goo9d write-n-I'm sorry bout the book but if my experience can bring another healin in the written word then if one person can take a short cut then my pain has been worth it.
To me it's like reaching into a garbage can full of roses once my inner healin comes then u r the rose I see. It's not easy but it's a road worthy of travel. P.m. me any time.
This poem is a masterpeice 'cause when I spend this much rattling ya gotta know it's a good one.
luv, huggs, prayer, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: Losing It All
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by sweetangeluk on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:49:51 AM AEST
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This is heart breaking Pixie.
I have experienced these feelings many years ago.
Alas our own happiness is put aside.
When we are busy pouring our hearts in to someone who is not worthy of our love our own self esteem goes under.
Love is a mutual feeling and when the going gets tough these are the times when your partner should be there by your side.
No matter how hard the journey.
Never settle for second best.
A fabulous poem.
(((HUGS))))
Take care of you
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Losing It All
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:13:33 AM AEST
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Hun..I hope this is just writing and not real..
But, if it is real. You know where I am.
People love you Krissie, we are all here for you.
Such a sad poem sweetie.
You are one of my fave emotional writers on the site.
Great write my friend,
Love ya!
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Losing It All
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:05:14 AM AEST
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I agree with Phil, i hope this is only writing cause we all love you silly and we want you to be happy, so you know where to find me if you're bored LOL.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: Losing It All
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by arden on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:48:58 AM AEST
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wow krissie.. hun i hope this isnt true, but if it is i'm here for ya hun :)
its very heartbrakingly sad, very emotional and deep.
*hugs*
Becky |
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Re: Losing It All
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 08:48:40 PM AEST
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These two that you posted today sound great when you read them out loud. The rhyme is just noticeable enough and like I said on that other one doesn't stick out all awkwardly like rhyme sometimes does.
Lots of love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: Losing It All
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:10:53 AM AEST
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Amazing piece, flowing from verse to verse with incredible emotion! You have true talent!! Keep your chin up, and God Bless...
*~Erin~* |
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