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A Woman's Power
Contributed by
nativesunflower4
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:48:46 AM in AEST
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"Marry me, Marry me!!! Make me the happiest man alive." he said.
"For without your love surely I'd be dead."
I answered him true and serious as can be.
"My answer is yes cause as you can see
I love you more than words can measure,
My pirate's desire, a true love's treasure."
He then took me in his arms and laid me down soft.
Kissed away my tears, alone in his loft.
I said," Let me go, my reputation you'd sour.
Please leave safe my virginal flower."
He stalked to the corner turned left and then right,
shook his fists and turned to take flight.
"You will marry me and make me your wife
and then we will be free of the strong judgments of life."
He grunted and groaned and walked out the door
leaving me crying alone on the floor.
Had I known of the pain lying stiff in his pants,
I never would have teased in our tight little dance.
He married me still and took my sweet flower
and taught me the strength my flower empowers!!!!
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Re: A Woman's Power
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by Beniam on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 01:59:51 AM AEST
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Needs a lil tweekin, "You will marry me and make me your wife" - Hubby saying that right... But more true than funny, I really did like it, hope you have more like this.
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Re: A Woman's Power
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 04:47:10 AM AEST
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A masterpeice as it's very powerfull, yet tender all mixed up in the scene but the last two lines best of all.
More, please/
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