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The World In A 13 Year Olds Eyes!

Contributed by BuggY on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:39:37 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy



This world we live in is full of hate,
I just wanna run to them white pearly gates.
Dropping bombs for a living!?
Why dont you start giving?!
Giving people a chance to live
Instead of being dives?!

All you terrorists, Im talking to you,
What youre doing isnt cool,
Is it what you believe in?
Because I really wanna understand a min.

Maybe you enjoy it,
Think about others for a bit.
All those lives and families youre killing,
Please sit back and start chilling.

This poem wont make a difference,
But guys,
Thats how I feel,
Thats what the world is like in a 13 year olds eyes




Copyright © BuggY ... [ 2005-03-20 06:39:37]
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Re: The World In A 13 Year Olds Eyes! (User Rating: 1 )
by xtremcalibur on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:42:50 AM AEST
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Nice write and thoughts from a 13-year old. Your heart is in the right place. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.


Re: The World In A 13 Year Olds Eyes! (User Rating: 1 )
by BuggY on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:07:49 AM AEST
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thank you for ur comment!! i really appreciate it! Thank You!


Re: The World In A 13 Year Olds Eyes! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 03:00:02 PM AEST
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Good Peom, i really feel bad for you, i know its got to be rough on a 13 year old. It made me think about when i was 13, the world has changed so much and im now 27.


Re: The World In A 13 Year Olds Eyes! (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:24:22 PM AEST
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nice job Buggy :) keep it up

love always,
Mexy




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