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Mend This Broken Angel
Contributed by
SweetButSimple
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Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hand me back my halo
Repair each broken wing
Redeem the graceful words
This angle longs to sing.
Un-cry the tears I've cried
Brighten my sky from grey
Put some hope beneath my wings
And I'll gladly fly away
Unstitch the smile I've sown
Make a face pure perfection
A gentle mind and thoughts
With joy in each reflection.
No burning crimsom tides
No craving for the knife
No voices cursing silently
'A pathetic, worthless life'.
Reason my existence
A reason just for me
I'm searching with blind eyes
That's why i can't see.
The light too far to reach
Temptation far too strong
This angels falling slowly
But I know I'm often wrong.
So regenerate my faith
Put sight behind each eye
Mend this broken angle
And gracefully, I'll fly
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SweetButSimple
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Re: Mend This Broken Angel
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by purplestary on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 06:54:38 PM AEST
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| an amazing write with great flow!!! i love the way you write..this was just....awsome....you have amazing talent. |
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Re: Mend This Broken Angel
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 11:17:22 PM AEST
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| wOW i LOVED THIS! GREAT WORK HERE! CHRISTINA |
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Re: Mend This Broken Angel
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by mina-1 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 03:57:19 AM AEST
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| this is a beautifully written poem. So touching and so heartfelt. Your verses flowed well and the imagery u cast in the readers head is just sensational. An excellent well written poem. Thanks for sharing it |
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Re: Mend This Broken Angel
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by Amaterian_Angel on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:02:59 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem!!! Well done! LOVED IT!
Beautifully descriptive and imaginative! |
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Re: Mend This Broken Angel
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:20:57 AM AEST
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A beautifuly writen poem, such vivid imagery.
Well done.
Jane |
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Re: Mend This Broken Angel
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by SimplyMe on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:23:56 AM AEST
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This was just beautiful. Wouldn't it be nice to have wings? To fly away from a situation you just can't handle? That would be awesome. Great write.
~Alucia~ |
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