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Someday...you will
Contributed by
LIving_In_My_Dream
on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 07:30:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Someday you'll feel the pain i felt
Someday you'll cry for me
Someday you'll walk the lonely road
of pain and misery
Someday your empty heart will break
Someday you'll wanna die
Someday your eyes will burn so bad
with the desperate need to cry
Someday you'll hide behind a smile
Someday you'll hold the knife
Someday you'll miss someone so bad
you'll want to end your life
Someday you'll hold a picture of me
and ask the question why
Someday you'll want me back so bad
enough to make you cry
Someday you'll hurt real bad inside
you wont know what to do
Someday you'll find you love me
but someday I wont love you
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Re: Someday...you will
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:34:23 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading your poem I had to read it twice because I liked it so so much. That person didnt love you in the beginning but, they will find out they love you and youll be over them...~~Crystal~~ |
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:34:50 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was a very powerful poem. I really liked it. It flowed so well too. I can't think of the right words to say to express myself, but just trust that it was very good. |
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Re: Someday...you will
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by allforyou on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 08:47:41 PM AEST
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That's a really awesome write.
--Kara |
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Re: Someday...you will
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th March 2005 @ 10:58:07 PM AEST
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| This is such an incredible write. I really did love it. |
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Re: Someday...you will
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 12:26:06 AM AEST
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| dani you wrote this one so well. this was brilliant. a masterpiece. your talent is clearly expressed in this. and sometimes someday is just a day away.... |
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Re: Someday...you will
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:17:42 AM AEST
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Whoa!!! this was wickedly done.
Nicely writen poem, im so gladi got to read this.
Jane |
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Re: Someday...you will
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by SimplyMe on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:16:21 AM AEST
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I liked this poem. I can relate in a sense. Great write. Sometimes a simple day is a lot closer than it seems.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: Someday...you will
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by aidious on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:09:16 PM AEST
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This poem is so uplifting - I love poems like this.
Thanks LIving_In_My_Dream |
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