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Only a dare by simmy
Contributed by
simmy
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 02:18:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As you look into my eyes,
I begin to melt.
You think you know me,
but look through all I've delt.
Eyes are burning,
burning with fire.
Looking through all,
all of my desire.
Not knowing what to do anymore,
my love for you has killed the air.
I know I kissed you,
but it was only a dare.
Copyright ©
simmy
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2005-03-21 02:18:58]
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Re: Only a dare by simmy
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by SocialMisfit on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 02:47:19 AM AEST
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simple yet full of fire very good write
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Re: Only a dare by simmy
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:16:37 AM AEST
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What a heartfelt write, it's sad yet beautiful at the same time.
Thanks for posting.
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