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Lava Lamp
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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The Lava Lamp
Akin with fire,
Eye balls fixed
Spirit's higher.
Dazed in stare
Mind at full drift,
Up to the clouds
Concentration lifts.
Unworldly forms
Swirling free,
Soothing warmth
Defying gravity.
Glistening fluid
Liquid wax,
Akin with fire
Mesmerically relaxed.
I love my lamp
Of lava kind,
It sorts me out
Unscrambles my mind.
Copyright ©
Unaekseveer1
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2002-12-18 17:40:00]
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Re: Lava Lamp
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by Devlina on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:05:00 PM AEST
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| Awwww....relaxed is right! I love it! It reminds me that I need a lava lamp. |
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Re: Lava Lamp
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 10:42:13 PM AEST
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This lamp is a very relaxing lamp to me....i love the lava lamp thanks for sharing this one i loved the way you wrote all this out...and i love the last lines where it says i love my lamp of lava kind, it sorts me out Unscrambles my mind...absolutely beautiful...
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Re: Lava Lamp
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 10:57:52 AM AEST
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Dean, This is a very good poem. I also enjoy relaxing by watching a lava lamp. But I can't relax that way now because I broke my last one, so I need a new one. I enjoyed you poem.
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Re: Lava Lamp
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 08:41:55 AM AEST
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Thankyou very muchly for your kind comments everybody peeps!
Happy Christmas
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Lava Lamp
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by tease_whizz on
Tuesday, 18th February 2003 @ 07:41:38 AM AEST
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| lol, this is great...who realised such a simple object could do such things? i get mesmerised by mine sometimes, it really does help to clear away your thoughts. i've read lots of your poetry, you have a great style of writing, and i liked your homepage too. keep writing :) KT xxx |
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