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Disturbing vision.
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:37:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Acid venom, in my chest.
Lying in bed, I can’t rest.
Purple shadows, circle the walls.
Bloodstained windows, threaten calls.
Sapphire sadness, hunting me.
Screaming madness, flowing free.
Bleeding venom, on my bed.
“Failure, failure”, say the thoughts in my head!
Black bodies, walk the room.
Dying corpses, arise from their tombs.
Nightmares come, in angry blows.
Hell comes, to awake some lows.
Blades on fire, melt through the skin.
It’s such a desire, it must be a sin.
Ruby flashes come bursting in.
Then in an instant, it all finishes…
Night’s whisper, settles down.
Echoes stop, in frozen sound.
Lost in emotion, I’m some how dead.
And left alone, with my screaming head…
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2005-03-21 05:37:17]
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Re: Disturbing vision.
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 10:51:52 AM AEST
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great...very nicely written...wonderful job at forum and rhyming...i really liked it...
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Re: Disturbing vision.
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by kydistortion69 on
Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 12:23:49 AM AEST
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Man this poem rocks I love everything about it
it really spoke to me in my own way. does that make any sense..my own way?...have to file that one for look up later... any way awesome poem |
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