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what if
Contributed by
babygal
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:30:56 AM in AEST
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lets see
what if someone is die and we don't know it
what if someone gets hit by a car
what if a dog gets ran over by a car
what if you feel in love and they turn you down to go to a dance
what if a family members in tthe hosptal dying
what if you come home from school and someone broke in your home
what if you got picked one by a popular girl and you stood up for youself
what if you don't really think your friend cool anymore
what if you mother and father got a divorce before your born
what if you don't know your real grandparents are
what if you are pregent and you don't want anybody to know
and you dad finds the test
what if you don't want to be here on earth
the question is what if
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Re: what if
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by xtremcalibur on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 10:51:04 AM AEST
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| The questions are great because each and everyone of them told the end story. If you sit down and think this write out again and give it more thought and take care of the spelling, the emotion that one should feel from your write would be a lot more intense as it should be. I got it, but I tend to put myself into something as if I were the poet. Thank you for sharing. |
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