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I want to know....
Contributed by
mina-1
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 04:25:15 PM in AEST
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I stare through my window at the stars
Cascading together way up far
As the night gently settles within itself
The doubts painted in my mind submerge
themselves
Sometimes you leave me guessing
I don't know
You say you love me
Why don't you let it show
I can't take this pain anymore
As my eyes swell the tears downpour
It feels like you're always playing me
If you don't want me
Please just set me free
My heart simply can't take anymore
The hurt and pain too strong to ignore
So if you want me
Show me that you care
Love this heart and make it aware
Because I can't wait forever
I won' t be the poor little beggar
Who runs after your love
Like a wounded love stricken dove
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Re: I want to know....
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 05:16:48 PM AEST
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"I stare through my window at the stars
Cascading together way up far
As the night gently settles within itself
The doubts painted in my mind submerge
themselves"
I love love love that part!
Somany times have I been in this place.
Great images...
Another great poem from you, hun.
Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: I want to know....
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by DorianChambers on
Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 06:36:19 PM AEST
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vERY BEAUTIFUL AND SENITIVE A CRY
FROM THE NIGHT FROM THE VOICE OF
THE HEART . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: I want to know....
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 12:46:49 AM AEST
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sweet release
good flow |
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Re: I want to know....
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 09:17:25 PM AEST
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Oh girl, I know the thoughts-n-feelings.
I've come to realize if they don't chase u they are either scarred or we don't need. Still with all the poems, songs and writes luv still remains a mystery for some.
keep writing, sue as we know it's our strength in weakness.
huggs, luv,
emy
Oh my hand is fine today. The Drs. appointment is jus a bone density test to check on my oasteoporrosis. I'll keep u posted tho.
always your friend,
emy |
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Re: I want to know....
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by jmpy84 on
Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 02:23:46 AM AEST
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| another great write |
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Re: I want to know....
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by NightOwl on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 11:12:31 AM AEST
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Amazing poem... what more can I say?? I love the last verse, and I can totally relate. Keep the faith!! It will get better... at least, that's what they tell me...
*~Erin~* |
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